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《21st Century》报正在举行“My friendship with ________”的征文比赛,请你写一篇短文参赛,首先介绍一下你好朋友的基本信息,然后记叙一件反映你们之间友谊的小事,并谈谈此事对你的影响。

注意事项:

1、词数不少于60词;

2、文中不得出现真实的校名和姓名。

参考词汇:tall, hair, bright, friendly, smile, help, best,…

My friendship with ________

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答案:
解析:

  One possible version:

My friendship with Mary

  In our lives, we may have many friends.And good friends really mean a lot to us.

  I have a friend named Mary.She is 12 years old.We are in the same class.She is tall with big black eyes.When we talk about something, she always looks at me, smiling.

  Two years ago, I came to this small town with my parents because my father found a new job here.Everything seemed strange to me when I went to my new school on the first day.I felt very lonely.Just then, Mary came to me.She invited me to play games with her, and we went home together after school.What’s more, she often helped me with my poor English.With her help, I made great progress.Can you believe it? Now, I can communicate with foreigners!

  Mary was so kind and helpful and we became good friends soon.It was Mary who gave me the greatest help when I was new here.A friend in need is a friend indeed.That is really true.

  书面表达评分标准:

  第一档:(13~15分)

  完全符合题目要求,表达思想清楚且积极向上,内容丰富。使用多种句型结构和丰富的词汇,语言通顺,语意连贯,具有逻辑性。

  第二档:(9~12分)

  基本符合题目要求,表达思想基本清楚,内容完整。语法结构和词汇基本满足文章需要。语言基本通顺,语意基本连贯。有少量语言错误,但不影响整体理解。

  第三档:(5~8分)

  部分内容符合题目要求,表达思想不够清楚,内容不够完整。语法结构和词汇错误较多,语言不通顺,影响整体理解。

  第四档:(0~4分)


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