Question

假设你是Daming，刚转学到育才中学（Yucai Middle School），请根据提示信息给你原学校的同学Liming发一封电子邮件，告诉他你现在的学校生活。

要点如下：

1. 每天7点到校。最喜欢周四，因为那天有……课，但是不喜欢……课，因为……。

2. 有一个朋友Zhang Qiang，他喜欢吃……，他最喜欢的运动是……，你们经常放学后在学校踢足球，他……学科很好，经常在……学科方面帮助你。

3. 学校生活忙碌但是很有趣。

要求：句子通顺，连贯，书写工整。内容不能遗漏，但可适当发挥，不少于60词。

Dear Li Ming,

Thanks for your last letter. I’m fine here because I like my new school life.

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___________________________________________________________________________.Best Wishes,

Daming

 

Answer 1

Dear Li Ming,

Thanks for your last letter. I’m fine here because I like my new school life. My new school life is busy but interesting. Every day I get to school at 7:00 am and go home at 4:30 pm. We have four classes in the morning and three classes in the afternoon. My favorite day is Thursday, because I have English and art that day. The two subjects are my favorite. But I don’t like math, because it’s difficult. At school, I also have a new friend, Zhang Qiang. He likes eating fruits very much. And football is his favourite sport. After school,he often plays football with me. He is very good at math. He often helps me with math. I’m happy that we are getting along with each other. Best Wishes,

Daming

【解析】

试题分析：这是一篇提纲作文。本文要求按照所给的提纲内容完成这封电子邮件，我们要用恰当的语言把所列举的内容准确地表达出来。写作中要包含每天到校的时间、具体的校园生活，包括课程的设置、自己最喜欢哪一天及原因等以及对自己帮助较大而且交往又较深的好友等这几个方面进行陈述等。根据材料内容可知本文主要是一般现在时态，人称主要是第一和第三人称，注意并列连词的使用及主谓一致问题。写作中注意上下文的过度，符合逻辑关系。

【亮点说明】这篇短文详细、全面地介绍了自己的校园生活，并包含了文中所要求的全部信息。其中使用了一些固定句式和短语，包含状语从句的准确使用为文章增色不少.如because I have English and art that day，likes eating fruits very much，is very good at，helps me with math，we are getting along with each other学习中再注意总结,牢记一些固定句式及短语,写作时就可以适当引用,使文章的表达更有逻辑性,更富有条理。

考点：提纲作文。