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5．提示：生活中有许多美好的瞬间：当你经过努力取得成功的时候；当你帮助别人或得到别人帮助的时候；当你看到别人做好事的时候…请以The Best Moment in My Memory 为题，写一件发生在你我身边的事，留下你记忆中最美的瞬间（精校）．
要求：
1．请根据所给的题目，用英语写一篇短文，词数不少于60个；
2．语言流畅、书写规范、卷面整洁；
3．文中不得使用真实姓名、校名，否则以零分记；
4．短文必须写在答题卷（卡）E，如在本卷作答，～律不得分（精校）．
The Best Moment in My Memory
How time flies!When I look back upon different events that have taken place in my life，I find I will neverforget one thing．That is the best moment in my memory（开篇点题）
When I was young，my parents were strict in my study．Once，I had a bad mark at the math test．I was shy and afraid to meet myparents．But when I got back home late，my parents knew what happened，they said to me："It doesn't matter，my child．We'll be always with you when you need help．We believe youwill be better next time．【高分句型一】Never give up!"I was moved and made up my mind to work harder and harder．（回忆事情）
I feel happy．Whenever I am in trouble，I can feel my parents'love．【高分句型二】I love them so much．（升华主题）．

Answer 1

分析 高分句型一：
We believe you will be better next time．
句中"you will be better next time"为宾语从句，这句话意为：我们相信你下次会更好的．
高分句型二：
Whenever I am in trouble，I can feel my parents'love．
句中"Whenever I am in trouble"为时间状语从句，"be in trouble"意为"有困难"．这句话意为：无论任何时候我有困难，我都能感受到父母的爱．

解答 The Best Moment in My Memory 
How time flies!When I look back upon different events that have taken place in my life，I find I will never forget one thing．That is the best moment in my memory（开篇点题）
When I was young，my parents were strict in my study．Once，I had a bad mark at the math test．I was shy and afraid to meet myparents．But when I got back home late，my parents knew what happened，they said to me："It doesn't matter，my child．We'll be always with you when you need help．We believe you will be better next time．【高分句型一】Never give up!"I was moved and made up my mind to work harder and harder．（回忆事情）
I feel happy．Whenever I am in trouble，I can feel my parents'love．【高分句型二】I love them so much．（升华主题）

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