Question

书面表达 （10分）

深圳是中国南方的一座现代化的城市。请根据以下提示，写一篇60词左右的作文。

提示: 1. 深圳有很多主题公园 (theme park), 例如：the Happy Valley, the window of world等等，人们喜欢在这些主题公园里玩;

2. 深圳有很多漂亮的海, 很多人喜欢去海里游泳;

3. 深圳逛街的地方很多, 大家都喜欢来深圳购物;

4. 深圳还有很多美味的食物。

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Answer 1

Shenzhen is a modern city in south China and it is a very beautiful city. A lot of visitors come to there for working, shopping and sightseeing every year.

There are many theme parks in Shenzhen, for example the Happy Valley, the window of world and so on. The visitors like to there play. There are a lot of the beautiful sea around Shenzhen, and the visitors like to swimming in the sea.There are many shopping places in Shenzhen, and the visitors like to there for shopping. Another reason that the visitors like to Shenzhen is many delicious foods .

Welcome to Shenzhen.

【解析】

试题分析：考查城市文化介绍类短文。要求.按提示介绍深圳，写一篇60字左右的短文。写作中可能会出现用词不当，语句不通顺，信息不全等问题。

【亮点说明】1.本范文103词，按提示介绍深圳。2.用到了there be句型、定语从句.

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