Question

写作（20分）

我国不少城市正在推广公共自行车，提倡人们“绿色出行，低碳生活”。现在某英文网站就此话题征文，请你参考下面的要点提示用英语写一篇短文投稿，谈谈推广公共自行车的好处。

内容要点：

优势	1.比汽车便宜很多，每个人都买得起
2.在上学，上班时段交通特别繁忙，如果有更多的人选择骑自行车，街道上就会有更少的汽车，也不会那么拥挤
3.有利于保护环境，因为...（请自拟一点）
4.......（请自拟一点）
愿望	.......（请自拟一点）

要求:1. 短文内容必须包含所有提示信息,可适当发挥,......部分请自拟内容作答;

2. 词数90左右. 开头部分已给出,不计入总词数.

3. 表达中请勿提及本人姓名.

Now, public bikes are provived for people in many cities in China. I think it’s a good thing. _______________________________________________________________________________

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Answer 1

Now, public bikes are provived for people in many cities in China. I think it’s a good thing. There are three reasons contributed to this. First of all, public bikes are much cheaper than cars so that almost everyone could afford it. Secondly, as we know, there is heavy traffic when people go to school or work. If more people choose to ride bikes, there will be fewer cars and the streets won't be as crowded as they are now. The most important thing is that riding bikes can help protect environment, because there will be less pollution. The last one, it will help people take exercises to build our body by riding bikes.

I hope that more people could stand by this suggestion to make it through as soon as possible.

【解析】

试题分析：这篇短文要求我们以公共自行车为线索，写一篇关于与环保相关的作文。题目中已经规定了这篇短文的写作提纲，主要包括两个部分。一个是关于推广公共自行车的优势，一个是阐述一下自己的愿望。关于使用公共自行车的优势，提纲中具体列出了三点，自己需要列出第四点优势。最后，自己还要写出关于公共自行车推广或者对整个环保工作的愿望。因此，本篇作文，不仅要考虑到如何准确生动的表达出已列出的观点，还要表达出自己的想法。写作时，需注意语句间的衔接，使文意连贯，表达流畅。

【亮点说明】这是一篇比较不错的作文。本文主要分成两个部分。第一个部分分四个方面解释公共自行车的优势。条理清晰，表达准确。如First of all, public bikes are much cheaper than cars so that almost everyone could afford it. Secondly, as we know, there is there is heavy traffic when people go to school or work.等。文章中还用了一些比较好的句型，如There are three reasons contributed to this、The most important thing is that、make it through等。

考点：提纲类作文。