Question

【题目】同学们，你们进入初中学习已有近四个月的时间了，你们觉得初中的学习和生活怎么样？快乐吗？假使你是Jack，在你受到你朋友Tom的来信后，请你根据所提供的信息告诉你的朋友有关你的学习和生活情况，并发表自己的观点。必须包含所给要点，词数80左右．

1．学校很大，有一个图书馆和许多教学楼。

2．学生们每天早起，上学从不迟到。

3．老师们工作努力，对学生都很好。

4．学校举行各种各样的活动，许多学生在学校玩得很开心。

5．有些学生认为他们整天忙于学习，没有时间去玩。

你认为呢？你希望……

Answer 1

【答案】

Dear Tom.

I’m happy to get your letter to know about your study and life at school " .Our school is very big. There is a library and many classroom buildings. In our school, the students get up early every day, they are never late for school. The teachers in our school work hard, and they are all nice to their students. There are all kinds of activities in our school. Many students think they have a good time at school.

Some students think they are busy studying at school all day, they don’t have much time to play. So they don’t feel happy. I hope our school can give us much time to do after-school activities. I hope the teachers will not give the students too much homework to do.

Yours sincerely

Jack

【解析】

试题分析：这是一篇给材料作文，本文已经给出了主要写作要点，动笔前要先认真阅读要点，然后围绕要点适当发挥。写作中，应注意描述的全面性，尽量将提示的内容利用上；结合材料内容，可知本文主要是第一，三人称，一般现在时态进行叙述。语言的表述应该符合语法的结构，造句应该符合英语的表达习惯。适当使用连词，做到上下文联系紧密，符合逻辑关系。

【亮点说明】这篇短文使用了大量的固定句式和短语，为文章增色不少。如: get up，起床；be late for，迟到；all kinds of，各种各样的；have a good time，玩得高兴等。学习中注意总结,牢记一些固定句式及短语,写作时就可以适当引用, 让文章更出彩。