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【题目】假如你是李军，是某中学初一的一名学生。你和父母在五一假期期间去了伦敦旅行。请根据下列提示，给你的笔友吉姆写一封电子邮件，告诉他你的旅行经历和感受。邮件格式已给出。

要点：1.乘飞机抵达；

2．在伦敦停留3天；

3．行程：(1)第一天参观了英国国家博物馆；

(2)第二天乘船沿泰晤士河旅行；

(3)第三天去了“伦敦眼”，饱览伦敦风光。

4．个人感受

要求：1．词数70左右（开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数）；

2．字迹工整，语言流畅，表达正确，逻辑清晰。

From:Li Jun

Sent:Sunday

To:Jim

Subject: My holiday in London

Hi, Jim! I went to London with my parents duringMay Day holiday.____________________________________________________________________

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Love,

Li Jun

Answer 1

【答案】From: Li Jun

Sent: Sunday

To: Jim

Subject: My holiday in London

Hi,Jim! I went to London with my parents during May Dayholiday. We stayed there for three days. After we arrived inLondon by plane, we began our tour of the city. On the firstday, we visited the British Museum with lots of world-famousworks of art. On the second day, we took a boat tour on theRiver Thames. It was so great ! On the last day, we went to theLondon Eye and did some sightseeing. We enjoyed ourselvesvery much. London is a beautiful city with a long history.

Love,

Li Jun

【解析】本题是书信类作文，要求写一封电子邮件，告诉自己的笔友旅行经历和感受。材料已给出，写作的时候要根据写作要点去组织材料，还要有适当的拓展，同时注意谋篇布局的顺序，运用合适的连接词连接全文。由于是写自己的旅行经历，因此人称为第一人称，时态为一般过去时态，最后的个人感受可以运用一般现在时态。描述时要尽量选择简洁的语言，运用合适的语法规则和词汇把各要点都准确表述出。难点在于选择词汇和句型。