Question

某英文报纸就家务劳动（Housework）话题征文，请你投稿。
每个家庭都有许多家务，人人都应该学做一些。谈谈你经常帮父母做哪些家务，有什么体会，并打算在暑假为家里做什么。
提示词语：every family，lots of housework，learn to do，help，parents，be/feel proud of
                                                                             
                                                                             
                                                                             
                                                                             

Answer 1

Every family has lots of housework. Everyone should learn to do some of it. I often help my parents do housework such as washing clothes，cleaning the room and watering flowers.
I think I’ve learned how to take good care of myself and my family by doing housework. Sometimes cleaning all the windows is an enjoyable experience. I really feel proud of myself. And doing housework is also a kind of exercise.
The summer holiday is coming. I’m going to learn how to cook some dishes. My parents will be happy to enjoy them.

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【亮点说明】范文中运用一些常见的短语help sb to do 帮助某人做某事；such as 比如；take good care of照顾某人； doing housework做家务；be proud of以，，为豪。 I often help my parents do housework such as washing clothes，cleaning the room and watering flowers.在这个句子中运用such as ,washing,cleaning and watering是三个并列的动词，形式保持一致。Sometimes cleaning all the windows is an enjoyable experience.这个句子中动名词做主语。