Question

请根据以下信息以“My best friend”为题，用英语写一篇短文。

我有一个真诚的朋友叫Tony.

他乐于助人并能为我保守秘密。

他的理想学校在上午9点开始，下午3:30结束。

他希望有足够的时间去参加课外活动。

每个月他都能参加学校的旅行，他总是玩的很快乐。

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Answer 1

【答案】

 

                            My Best Friend

  I have a good friend,his name is Tony.

  Tony is an honest boy.He is always ready to help other people .He always says that his dream school begins at 9 am,and ends at3:30 pm.In his dream school ,children can play outside ,they don’t have so much homework to do .Tony hopes he can have enough time to do outdoor activities.He likes school traveling every month.He always can have fun.

 He is my best friend.Can you tell me something about your friend?

【解析】

试题分析：这是一篇提纲作文。写作文之前要认真审题。把握好人称，时态。在写作时，要保证题中所罗列的要点都要能够准确的表达出来。注意时态语时间状语的搭配及主谓一致问题。写作中适当使用连词，注意上下文联系紧密，符合逻辑关系。

【亮点说明】这篇短文用了大量的固定短语如：be ready to do sth,enough time,have fun.习中注意总结,牢记一些固定句式及短语,写作时就可以适当引用,使文章的表达更有逻辑性,更富有条理.从文章结构上来说，前后相对应，文章层次十分分明。

考点：提纲作文。