Question

18．前不久，中央电视台"焦点访谈"栏目曾就"中国式过马路"现象进行了不少采访和评论．请根据以下提示写一篇英语短文．
提示：
1结合自己的所见所闻或亲身经历描述"行人闯红灯"（pedestrians run the red light）引发的若干问题；
2 提出一些解决措施．
要求：
1 内容包括所给提示要点，可适当发挥；
2 不得出现真实姓名和地名；
3 词数：80-100．短文的开头已给出（不计词数）
Not long ago，CCTV"Focus Talk"carried out many interviews and made some relevant comments on the phenomena---"Crossing roads in the Chinese style"．              ．

Answer 1

分析 高分句型一：I was so hurried that I ignored the red light我是如此匆忙以至于我忽视了红灯．so…that…如此…以致…，后面引导一个句子．
高分句型二：As far as I am concerned，it has profound significance to take actions就我而言，采取行动具有深远的意义．As far as I am concerned在我看来；take actions采取行动．

解答 Not long ago，CCTV"Focus Talk"carried out many interviews and made some relevant comments on the phenomena---"Crossing roads in the Chinese style"．（说明现象）
Take one of my experiences for example．It was a Tuesday and it rained cat and dog．There was only a few minutes left for me to go to school on time．I was so hurried that I ignored the red light．（高分句型一）It was so dangerous for me that the car hardly hit me seriously．From then on，I never dare to run the red light．I think it can lead to many problems．There is no doubt that it will not only make the traffic heavier but also lose your own life．（引发的若干问题）
As far as I am concerned，it has profound significance to take actions．（高分句型二）For the government，they should make laws and appeal to the importance of safety．For the other people，we should cherish our lives and obey the traffic rules．（解决措施）

点评 （1）句型多样化，不要I（We）…到底，使人觉得乏味．（2）适当使用一些并列句或主从复合句．（3）进一步描绘人或事物时，适当使用定语从句．（4）适当使用分词或分词短语，烘托谓语动词．（5）偶尔使用一下倒装句，增加新鲜感．