Question

假如你是张明，你在学校学生会里看到一项关于学生遇到的种种“烦恼”的调查。请你阅读以下20位学生填写的调查表，然后从中选择你认为最大的烦恼，并根据自己的实际经验或体会，给出建议,100左右。要求：

1．根据提示内容，选出一种烦恼，并给出建议。

2．逻辑清楚，语句通顺，行文流畅，自由发挥，观点不限, 无需标题。

Problem Survey
Problems	Numbers of students
Do badly in lessons.	6
Don’t get on well with classmates.	5
Feel lonely at school.	4
Don’t have much free time.	3
Become fat.	2

 

Answer 1

【答案】

 

I am Zhangming. I think it's not strange to have worries. Some students say they have become fat and that it really makes them feel bad about themselves．I think this is one of the biggest worries for us．But I think we can do something about it．

   First, you could eat less. The body needs food for energy, but you’ll become fat if you eat more than your body needs. If you eat less, the body can burn more calories than you eat. Second, do more exercise. Doing exercise can also help the body burn the calories and make you thinner. There are many ways to do exercise. For example, you could go to school on foot or by bike.

   Don't worry too much．I think you will become fit soon.

【解析】

试题分析：这是一篇给材料的话题作文。我们要从提示的表格内选择一种“烦恼”来作为材料写。用正确的英语把如何解决这个烦恼的建议表达出来。动笔前要组织语言材料，适当发挥。根据内容可知本文应该是在表达自己的观点，注意语气的婉转礼貌。会正确地表达建议。写作中适当使用连词，注意上下文的逻辑顺序。

【亮点说明】这篇短文使用了固定的句式和短语，为文章增色不少.如: it's not strange to, it really makes them feel bad about，one of the biggest worries等,学习中注意总结,牢记一些固定句式及短语,写作时就可以适当引用。因为使用了一些表示顺序的连词，表达建议的句子也有条理，如：First, Second,和For example,等等。

考点：话题作文。