Question

4．良好的生活与学习习惯对我们的成长是非常重要的．请从以下的习惯中选择一个你以前做得不够好，但现在已具备的好习惯，谈一谈你养成这个习惯的过程及收益．
要求：（1）不使用真实的校名、人名等相关信息；
（2）内容完整，书写整齐；
（3）80词左右；
（4）文章的开头已给出，但不计入总词数．
 
My good habit

Early to bed and early to rise is my good habit．

My good habit is early to bed and early to rise．Two years ago，when I was a Grade 7 student，I liked reading books in bed．
Every day after I finished my homework，I lay in bed until 24：00 o'clock．The next day I couldn't get up on time．I used to be late for school，and I felt tired in class．It was too bad．With the help of my teacher and my parents，I gave up the bad habit．
Ever since then，I go to bed early and get up early．I never go to school late again．As a result，I'm much stronger and doing better in school now．．

Answer 1

分析 这是一篇提纲作文，本文已经给出了主要写作要点（选择一个你以前做得不够好，但现在已具备的好习惯，谈一谈你养成这个习惯的过程及收益），动笔前要先认真阅读要点，然后围绕要点适当发挥．写作中，应注意描述的全面性，尽量将提示的内容利用上；结合材料内容，可知本文主要是第一人称，一般现在及过去时态进行叙述．语言的表述应该符合语法的结构，造句应该符合英语的表达习惯．适当使用连词，做到上下文联系紧密，符合逻辑关系．

解答 My good habit is early to bed and early to rise．Two years ago，when I was a Grade 7 student，I liked reading books in bed．Every day after I finished my homework，I lay in bed until 24：00 o'clock．The next day I couldn't get up on time．I used to be late for school，and I felt tired in class．It was too bad．With the help of my teacher and my parents，I gave up the bad habit．Ever since then，I go to bed early and get up early．I never go to school late again．As a result，I'm much stronger and doing better in school now．

点评 这是一篇提纲作文，内容是贴近学生实际的习惯问题．本作文中给出的要点比较简略，动笔前先要围绕这些要点组织材料，确定写作内容，注意将这些要点全部表达出来，写作时注意准确运用时态，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑关系．