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【题目】书面表达(本题15分)根据要求完成短文写作。请将作文写在答题卡指定的位置上。

近期各种电视选秀节目愈发火热，有些中学生也加入了选秀的行列。英语课上，张老师让你们对这种现象进行讨论。请你根据以下提示写一篇发言稿，并在课堂上发表演说。

内容包括： 1．描述生活中人们参加各种电视选秀节目的现象。

2．谈谈同学们对电视选秀节目的看法(包括优点和缺点)。

3．作为一名中学生，你如何理智地看待电视选秀节目?

作文要求： 1．不能照抄原文；．不得在发言稿中出现学校的真实名称和学生的真实姓名。．

2．语句连贯，词数80个左右。发言稿的开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。

Hi，everyone! would like to say something about the talent shows that are popular on TV these days.

That's all for my speech．Thanks for listening．

Answer 1

【答案】

Hi,everyone! I would like to say something about the talent shows that are popular on TV these days. As we can see, both the young and the old, even children are crazy about taking part in such shows.

In our class, different classmates have different opinions about TV talent shows. Some classmates think the shows can make them famous and rich. They think young people should do something different. If they have the chance to show their abilities to others, they can be more confident. Others think it’s very hard for them to become successful. If they don’t do well in the show, they will be laughed at.

As a student, I think we are too young to take part in these TV talent shows, and we should study hard and spend more time on our study.

That’s all for my speech. Thanks for listening.

【解析】

试题分析：本次作文为话题类作文，要求对电视选秀节目写一篇发言稿。写作要点已经列出，要求明确，故要完成写作任务，务必把各要点表达清楚。

写作亮点：本篇范文成功地完成了写作任务，要点全面，结构连贯。本文应用了很多短语使得文章很生动，例如As we can see, both the young and the old, even children are crazy about taking part in such shows. we should study hard and spend more time on our study.条件状语从句 If they have the chance to show their abilities to others, they can be more confident. If they don’t do well in the show, they will be laughed at.的应用更使得短文表述更准确。总之，该文是一篇不错的短文。