Question

书面表达
刘伟，无臂钢琴演奏者。他十岁时在一次意外中失去双臂，但他并没有放弃成为一名钢琴家的梦想。经过刻苦用脚练习弹琴，他最终在“中国达人秀”（China’s Got Talent）的舞台上实现了自己的梦想。请根据以上内容写一篇英语短文。
要求：
简要描述刘伟的经历；
谈谈从他的经历中得到的启示；
词数80左右。开头已给出，不计入总词数。
Liu Wei, an armless piano player, has a very special experience.

Answer 1

Liu Wei, an armless piano player, has a very special experience. He lost his arms in an
accident when he was 10, but he didn’t give up his dream of being a pianist. He tried to practice playing the piano with his feet. Finally he realized his dream in "China’s Got Talent".
As a student, I’ve learnt a lot from his story. We may meet a lot of difficulties in our future life, but we should believe that our dream will come true by working hard. No matter how hard life is, we won’t fail unless we give up our hope.

解析试题分析：这是一篇提纲类作文，要求写一篇介绍无臂钢琴演奏者刘伟的短文。本题给出的材料较为详细，写作中首先要描述一下刘伟的经历，然后谈谈自己受到的启示。通过阅读材料可知在叙述刘伟的经历部分主要用一般过去时态，在表达自己感想时可用一般现在时态及将来时态。动笔前可以按照材料内容列出简单提纲，写出关键单词。写作中注意语义通顺，符合逻辑关系。上下文之间可以适当使用连接词。
考点：提纲类作文
点评：做英语书面表达时，要注意认真审题，分析体裁，确定时态；分析内容要点，列出一些基本词汇及词组；注意表达的条理性，用好连接词。最后，注意不要犯语法、句法以及搭配性错误。