Question

1．前几天，一些同学就英语学习现状进行了一次讨论，发现有如下问题：=1：对学习英语没有兴趣=2：记忆单词有困难=3：怕出错，不敢参与与小组讨论=4：阅读中不知如何处理生词=5：考试不及格，经常得低分…

假如你是刘明，在英语学习中也遇到类似问题，请你以邮件形式向李教授咨询，希望得到帮助．
注意：1．写出至少4点你在英语学习中的问题．
2．参考提示，也可以根据实际情况适当发挥．
3．字数90词左右，开头和结尾已经给出，不计入总词数．

Dear Professor Li，
I'm very glad to write to you．I have some problems inEnglish learning．I've so many problems to trouble you now．English is so difficult that I nearly want to give it up!In English class I can't follow my teacher because of the poor listening．Also I can't remember the words clearly．Although I spend much time on it，I still can't use words in the right way．
What's worse，when I read English，I am often trapped in the unknown words．It stops me from receiving the main information．You can imagine what the result of my English learning is!
Those worry me a lot．What should I do？Would you please help me？I will be very grateful to get your reply．

Yours，
Liu Ming．

Answer 1

分析 提纲作文要求考生根据所给的写作要求和提纲，确定文章的中心思想，然后紧紧围绕中心思想展开写作．要求考生在保证内容要点全部概括的基础上可以充分发挥自己的想象，进而用自己的语言来表达某种观点或看法，增添了写作的灵活性，同时能较好地考查考生的想象能力和英语语言表达能力．

①English is so difficult that I nearly want to give it up!英语太难了，我几乎想放弃！句子中so…that…引导的句子的意思是如此…以至于…，引导的是一个从句；want to do sth想做某事；give up放弃．

②I have some problems in English learning．我在英语学习方面有些问题．句子中have some problems in doing在某某方面有问题．

解答 Dear Professor Li，
       I'm very glad to write to you．I have some problems in English learning．I've so many problems to trouble you now．（引出话题）
English is so difficult that I nearly want to give it up!In English class I can't follow my teacher because of the poor listening．Also I can't remember the words clearly．Although I spend much time on it，I still can't use words in the right way．
What's worse，when I read English，I am often trapped in the unknown words．It stops me from receiving the main information．You can imagine what the result of my English learning is!（英语学习中出现的问题）
Those worry me a lot．What should I do？Would you please help me？I will be very grateful to get your reply．（希望Professor Li给予答复）
Yours，Fang Hua

点评 写好提纲式作文的关键是认真审题和分析所给的提纲，因此考生首先要认真阅读前面的提示，认清写作要求和提纲之间的关系，然后确定文章的主题、文体、人称和时态．根据所给提纲，列出要点，并以此为基础充分发挥自己的想象力，灵活运用英语知识，采用不同的表达方式将各要点完整地表述出来，注意主次分明，详略得当．语言力求准确、简洁．根据情景的发展，按顺序安排好材料．同时应选用合适的连接词或过渡词，使文章具有一定的连贯性．考生必须认真查验是否有漏写情况，有无拼写错误及标点误用等．