Question

书面表达(共1题，计20分)

最近，盐城亭湖新区实验学校各班召开了以“我的中国梦”为主题的班会。请根据下列提示，用英语写一篇文章，记述班会情况及自己的梦想。内容要点：

	Dreams	Reasons	Actions
Millie	Volunteer	1.be a volunteer doctor in the Red Cross 2.save people’ s lives	1. go to a good medical college; 2. try to learn different kinds of skills .
Simon	Director	1.be Guo Jingming’s fan 2.film the film like tiny times	1.read more books; 2.go to Beijing Film Academy(北影)
I	….	…	…

写作要求：

1、文章必须包含所提供的信息（Millie, Simon两位同学畅谈了自己的梦想），并适当发挥；

2、你谈到了自己的梦想，以及如何实现自己的梦想。

3、文中不得出现真实的人名，

4、词数：90词左右（文章开头已写好，不计入总字数）

Recently we had a class meeting on the topic of My Chinese Dream. Encouraged by President Xi’s Chinese Dream, everyone talked about his understanding of the Chinese Dream. We all believe that this dream will come true in the future.

Millie has wanted ______________________________________________________________________________

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Answer 1

Recently we had a class meeting on the topic of My Chinese Dream. Encouraged by President Xi’s Chinese Dream, everyone warmly talked about his understanding of the Chinese Dream. We all believe that this dream will come true in the future.

Millie has wanted to be a volunteer doctor . She wants to work for the Red Cross. She thinks doctors are doing a meaningful job. They not only save people’s lives but also encourage their patients to fight with illnesses. She said she must learn as much as she can so that she can get into a good medical college and learn different kinds of skills.

Simon also talked about his own dream, He is Guo Jingming’s fan. He said he wanted to make popular films like Tiny Times when he grew up. In order to go to Beijing Film Academy, he would work hard from now on and read more best-sellers.

I want to be a doctor when I grow up because doctors not only can save people’s lives but also help people to live a better life with their professional knowledge. To realize my dream, I must try to study/work hard from now on. I should often do sports to keep healthy. I should obey the school rules and take part in all kinds of meaningful activities.I hope my dream will come true, too.

【解析】

试题分析：这是一篇给材料作文。本文所给材料比较详细，我们要做的就是用正确的英语把这些内容表达出来。动笔前要认真阅读材料，不可遗漏要点，并适当发挥。注意时态和时间状语的搭配及主谓一致问题。写作中适当使用连词，注意上下文联系紧密，符合逻辑关系。

【亮点说明】

这篇短文思路清晰，逻辑性强。依次介绍了米勒，西蒙及作者自己的梦想。文中使用了适当的连词，短语。使文章上下连贯，语句通顺。

考点：提纲类作文