Question

Tom	Appearance（外貌）	又高又壮，戴眼镜，总是面带笑容
	Nationality（国籍）	英国
	Personalities（个性）	幽默，慷慨；乐于助人（请举一例）
		喜欢旅游，上个月去了北京，参观了很多名胜。
	Future plan	长大后想当一名社会工作者。（说明原因）

 
要求：1. 须包含以上所有提示，可适当发挥；
2. 词数：80词左右，文章开头已给出，不计入总词数。
I have a good friend named Tom.______________________________________________

Answer 1

I have a good friend named Tom. He comes from England. He is tall and strong. He wears glasses. He always wears a smile on his face.
Tom has a good sense of humour. He is generous and helpful. He often helps us with our homework..
Tom likes travelling. Last month, he went to Beijing with his family. He visited many places of interest there.
Tom wants to be a social worker when he grows up. Then he can listen to people’s problems and help them to solve their problems.

这是一篇给材料作文。给出的材料比较详细，我们所要做的首先是应用正确的英语句子把这些内容表达出来，在此基础上亦可适当发挥，注意不要遗漏材料中给出的要点。写作前先结合要表达的事情确定句子的人称时态，注意标点符号及大小写等问题，不要犯语法错误。注意上下文之间的逻辑关系，语意连贯。
点评：注意写作中的时态、人称和数的问题，时态一般是一般现在时态，人称是单数第三人称较多。写作中语言要准确、简明，说明有条理，符合逻辑。