Question

根据下表所列内容，写一篇文章介绍你的笔友张平，并根据他的困惑给他提一些建议。要点表达要全，可适当发挥。字数100字左右。

	出生日期	1997年8月23日
基本	星座	Virgo
情况	个性	谦虚，实事求是，注重细节。
爱好	酷爱足球，热爱大自然，加入Birdwatching Club两年了
	学习	作业多，想考高分，压力大。
困惑	情感	父母整天忙于工作，不时感到孤独。
	穿白色衣服，因为……
建议	使用黄色文具复习迎考，因为……
多与家人朋友……

Zhang Ping is my pen friend. He_______________________________________________

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Answer 1

【答案】

 

.  Zhang Ping is my pen friend. He was born on August 23, 1997. He is a Virgo. Zhang Ping is a modest person. He’s practical and pays attention to details. He has many hobbies. He is crazy about playing football. He also loves nature. He has been in the Birdwatching Club for 2 years. However, as a Grade 9 student, he has some problems. He has too much homework to do. He feels stressed because he wants to get high marks in exams. What’s more, his parents are busy working all day and have no time for him, so he feels lonely from time to time.

    I want to offer Zhang Ping some advice. When he feels stressed , he should wear white, because white can make him feel calm and peaceful. When he study for exams, he can use yellow stationery, because yellow is the colour of wisdom. When he feels lonely, he can have communication with his family or friends and share his worries with them. I hope my advice will be of great value to him.

【解析】

试题分析：本文是人物简介，给出一定的汉语提示。给考生发挥的余地 较大。对于考生的综合能力较高，要求考生有很强的谋篇布局的的能力和组织要点的能力。首先要选择自己熟悉的短语或者句型，在自己能力范围内，选择句式要赋予变化，这样才能证明你能更好的驾驭。同时也要选择合适的连接词，把各个要点组织成一个整体。最后要注意使用高级词汇与高级句型使文章显得更有档次。因为是人物介绍，故时态用一般现在时较好，注意人称的转换

【亮点说明】本文出现一些比较觉的短语，如pay attention to 注意，be crazy about 对，，疯狂着迷。Be busy doing 忙于做某事。Share sth with sb 与某人分享某事。He has too much homework to do 他有很多功课要做，考查 have sth to do 有事要做。He feels stressed because he wants to get high marks in exams， 因为想取得好的分数故感觉很有压力，feel stress 感到压力。I hope my advice will be of great value to him.， 我希望我的建议对你有所帮助，提到 be of +抽象名词等于be + adj 。本文还出现一些高级词汇如stressed marks  advice communication  value， 为文章增色不少。 文中还出现一些连词如because ,what’s more, however 使文章流畅，逻辑分明。

考点： 提纲类作文。