Question

为了使同学们与人交往时举止更加文雅，你校学生会正在举办以 “How to behave well?”为主题的英语征文比赛，请你写一篇短文。(词数90左右)
短文要点如下：
1.在公共场所排队等候，插队是不礼貌的.
2.别人挡了道，不推不挤，说对不起.
3.公共场所不大声叫嚷.
4.入乡随俗.
5．请你就此话题再补充个人看法.
How to Behave Well
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Answer 1

One possible version：
How to Behave Well
Behave well is the secret of getting on well with others. In public, we should always queue, it’s rude to push in before others. If they are in your way, we shouldn’t touch or push past them instead, we’d better say“Excuse me”,and be polite enough to wait till they move. Keep our voice down in public. Don’t shout or laugh loudly. Remember one saying goes,“When in Rome, do as the Romans do.”In my opinion,  we should try to be honest and always ready to help others.

试题分析：
这是一篇给材料作文，介绍与人交往时如何举止更加文雅。结合所给材料，可知本文主要考查一般现在时态，人称为第一，三人称，注意主谓一致问题，句子结构主要为系表结构，注意一些常见句式的应用，比如：we should always......；we shouldn’t ......；we’d better......及Try to be ......等句式的应用。写作中注意运用代词，注意多种句式交替运用。写作中注意叙述顺序，符合逻辑关系，注意列出题目要求的要点。
【亮点说明】本文结构紧凑，语言简练。开头介绍了举止优雅的重要性，接下来介绍如何举止优雅，最后说出自己的观点。此处用了getting on well with，enough to ， Keep our voice down及try to 等这些词组的运用也让文章增色不少。