Question

11．初中阶段的学习生活即将结束．假设你是张华，身在中考考场，回想自己在父母和师长的关爱和帮助下的成长过程，心中充满感戴之情．请根据表中所列信息，用英语给父母或老师写一封70词左右的短信，表示谢意．

感谢对象	Father	Mother	Miss Gao
参考词汇	take care of，love，help，encourage，cheer up…
	thankful，work hard，try to do better…

注意：1．感谢对象可在父母或老师中任选其一，但请避用真实姓名和校名．
2．除表格所列关键词语外，还可适当发挥、举例并抒发感受．
3．信的开头和结尾已经给出．
DearMum/Dad/Mum and Dad，
  Words fail me when I want to express my thanks to you…You've taken good care of me in the past three years．When I was in trouble，you used to encourage me and cheer me up．Once I argued with my classmates and I didn't know how to deal with it．You talked with me the whole evening and gave me a lot of advice on how to get along with others．With your help，I've become a popular boy and made a lot of friends．I'm so thankful to you for your love and care that I'll work harder and try to do better in the future．
Best wishes!
                                                    Yours
                                                         Zhang Hua．

Answer 1

分析 这是一篇图表作文．内容是父母或老师写一封信，表示谢意．时态主要为一般过去时和一般现在时．人称主要为第一、二人称．
写作思路：考生需要首先审清主题，围绕主题展开作文．
其次考生可从以下几个方面展开作文，即本文的写作要点：
1．感谢的对象；
2．感谢原因；
3．举例说明
4．感受和打算．
常用到的重点短语：
take care of照顾
in trouble 处于困境
argue with sb 与某人争吵
cheer up 使振奋起来
used to do sth 过去常常做某事
get along with sb 与某人相处
try to do sth 尽力做某事
【高分句型】
1．①When I was in trouble，you②used to encourage me and cheer me up．
①when引导的时间状语从句．in trouble 处于困境
②used to do sth 过去常常做某事，cheer up 使振奋起来．
2．①Once I ②argued with my classmates and I didn't know③how to deal with it．
①once 副词．曾经．
②argue with sb 与某人争吵
③疑问词+to do sth 作为know的宾语． deal with 处理
3．I'm ①so thankful to you for your love and care that I'll work harder and ②try to do better in the future．
①so…that如此…以至于，that引导的结果状语从句．
②try to do sth 尽力做某事

解答 Dear Mum/Dad/Mum and Dad，（感谢的对象）
   Words fail me when I want to express my thanks to you．You've taken good care of me in the past three years．When I was in trouble，you used to encourage me and cheer me up．【高分句型】（感谢原因）Once I argued with my classmates and I didn't know how to deal with it．【高分句型】You talked with me the whole evening and gave me a lot of advice on how to get along with others．With your help，I've become a popular boy and made a lot of friends．（举例说明）I'm so thankful to you for your love and care that I'll work harder and try to do better in the future．【高分句型】（感受和打算）
Best wishes
Yours
Zhang Hua

点评 在初中三年的学习生活中，父母、老师给了我们很多帮助．假设你是李明，在即将毕业之际，用英语写一段文字以表达感激之情．感谢的对象在父母、老师中任选其一，根据这个内容可知这里叙述的过去的事情，所以句子应该用过去时．后面的感受及打算部分句子应该用将来时．要注意句子上文之间的衔接．本文用了一些短语和句式，增加了文章的色彩．短文中还用了一些连词，使句子结构更加复杂化，增加了文章的亮点