Question

16．Write a passage of at least 60 words about the topic"How to Celebrate Graduation．"（以"如何庆祝毕业"为题写一篇不少于60词的短文，标点符号不占格．）
Situation：临近毕业，班里的同学们打算举行一次毕业庆祝活动，他们在讨论征集庆祝活动的建议．以"How to Celebrate Graduation"为题写一篇英语短文，谈谈你的建议并陈述理由．
（注意，短文中不得出现考生的姓名，校名及其它相关信息，否则不予评分．）

Answer 1

分析 高分句型：
①I'm very happy to tell you the ways that we  celebrate our graduation．我很高兴地告诉你们我们庆祝毕业的方式．句子中be happy to do sth很高兴做某事，that we  celebrate our graduation在这里作定语修饰先行词ways．
②It's a great way to promote our relations．这是促进我们关系的好方法．句子中it作形式主语，后面的to引导的不定式作真正的主语．

解答 How to Celebrate Graduation．
I'm very happy to tell you the ways that we  celebrate our graduation（高分句型）．（引出话题）
The most common way is to treat our teachers，relatives and friends to a big dinner，during which friends get together to have fun drinking，singing and dancing．It's a great way to promote our relations（高分句型）．But it usually costs a lot，which we can't afford．Some others plan to have a trip to celebrate it．Though it helps us broaden our horizons，we'll be very tired，especially after a hard process of preparing for the college entrance examination．（毕业庆祝活动建议及理由）
In my opinion，we can buy some flowers or cook a delicious meal for our parents．In this way，we express our thanks to them in return for their love，care and support in our school life．（我的观点）

点评 考生首先要认真阅读前面的提示认真审题，确定文章的中心．注意文章文体、人称和时态．要求介绍．同时应选用合适的连接词或过渡词，使文章具有一定的连贯性．温馨提醒：考生必须认真查验是否有漏写情况，有无拼写错误及标点误用等．