Question

6．I Believe I Can Fly 是一首催人奋进的励志歌曲．请你根据以下要点以"I Believe I Can Fly'为题，用英语写一篇短文，参加某英语杂志社的写作比赛．
内容要点：1．这首歌告诉我们自信的重要性；
2．自信给勇气去尝试，使人成功；
3．梦想和自信，使人勇敢面对困难；
4．没有梦想和自信，不会获得成功；
5．你的感悟（考生自拟，至少一点）

Answer 1

分析 【高分句型一】
You should have a dream that you want to be or want to do．你应当有一个你想成为什么或者想干什么的梦想．
that引导的定语从句的应用；want to be想成为什么
【高分句型二】
In my opinion，if  I did what I mentioned above，I believe that I can see the most beautiful view that no one can see．依我看来，如果我做到了上述内容，我相信我会看到别人看不到的最美的风景．
In my opinion依我看来；what I mentioned above，what引导的宾语从句；that I can see the most beautiful view，that引导的宾语从句；that no one can see，that引导的定语从句

解答 I Believe I Can Fly
When I heard the song"I Believe I can fly"，I always feel my chest is full of confidence．（引出下文）
Everyone hopes they can succeed someday，but the successful people are always in the minority．WHY？
Because there are some important elements for success．（提出问题）
Firstly，dreams．You should have a dream that you want to be or want to do．【高分句型一】It can be a goal．It is like a ship has a destination on the boundless sea．
Secondly，courage．You are not afraid of making a risk，like the saying"Nothing venture，nothing gain"．Don't always play safe．
Thirdly，confidence．You have to believe you can do that．Holding that spirit you can handle all kinds of difficulties on the way to success．
Last but not least，we always keep going．Don't quit on any time and any situation．（建议）
In my opinion，if  I did what I mentioned above，I believe that I can see the most beautiful view that no one can see．（我的理解）【高分句型二】

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