Question

【题目】书面表达（共1题，计15分）

假入你是Linda, 16岁，一个开朗外向、乐于助人的女孩。你需要向美国Brearley School递交申请，其中，需要说明你曾参加过的志愿者活动。请根据以下信息写一封申请书。

1) 简单向对方学校介绍自己的基本情况；

2) 从下面四幅图中选择两项志愿者活动，并介绍你参加这两项活动的情况；

3)描述参加活动的感受。

clean up parks cheer up sick kids raise money for charity give out ads

Dear Brearley School,

I’m writing to you in hope of studying in your school.

Answer 1

【答案】

One possible version：

Dear Brearly School,

I’m writing to you in hope of studying in your school. My name is Linda, I’m 16 years old. I am an outgoing girl. And I’m always ready to help others. I joined a volunteer activity last year. I really enjoyed it. I helped clean up parks, for it can not only help protect environment but also remind people of environmental awareness. I also went to hospitals to cheer up sick kids. I played with them and told them stoyies, they were very happy to be with me. Ithink it’s a good way for us students to learn and communicate by volunteering, and it is of great importance. I’m looking forward to your letter.

Yours,

Linda.

【解析】

试题分析：通过审题，可知这是一篇给材料作文。要求根据图片及提示句子写一封信。本文所给材料比较详细，并且给出了具体要求，我们要做的就是用正确的英语把这些内容表达出来。动笔之前要认真阅读材料，不可遗漏要点，并适当发挥，注意时态和时间状语的搭配及主谓一致问题。

写作亮点：通过题目要求可以看出，1.本文可能使用的时态是一般现在时和一般过去时。2.可能用到的句型或短语有（除了提示短语外）：be ready to do sth. not only...butalso. It’s a good way for us to do sth. look forward to doing sth. 3.最后检查全文，使行文流畅，语法拼写要正确。