Question

【题目】根据要求完成大作文，词数：80-100词。

每年十月份，越来越多的游客来本溪赏枫叶。请你根据以下提示，说说如何给游客可留下“景美人更美”的好印象，从自身做起，做文明本溪人！

提示词：beautiful views美丽的景色

要求：

1．语意连贯，层次清晰，书写规范。

2．文中不得出现真实姓名与校名。

3. 短文开头已给出，不计入总词数。

How to be a polite citizen

Benxi is a good place to watch maple leaves (枫叶) in October.

Answer 1

【答案】How to be a polite citizen

Benxi is a good place to watch maple leaves（枫叶）in October. Let's leave the visitors a good impression not only for the beautiful views , but also as a Benxi citizen. How to be a polite citizen?

First, We must be friendly. Use"please,OK,welcome" with smile when you talk with visitors. Besides, we should be ready to help others.Try to be a helpful person. If visitors need us,we should help them. What's more, we should follow the rules. For example,we mustn't step on the grass or pick flowers. We mustn't drop litter carelessly. At last, we also need to behave well in public. We stand for our city Benxi in public. So it needs our good manners.

Why not do as above points?Let's try our best to be a polite citizen.

【解析】

这是一篇给材料作文。首先要认真审题，看清题目中的要求和要点；然后根据提示内容，列出写作要点及每个要点中可能要用到的表达；写作时注意准确运用时态，上下文意思要连贯，符合逻辑关系；尽量使用自己熟悉的单词句式，同时也要注意使用高级词汇和高级句型，以便使文章更有档次。特别注意在选择句式时要赋予变化。注意不要遗漏任何要点内容。最后，要仔细检查有无单词拼写错误、标点符号误用等，还要检查字数是否符合要求。