Question

【题目】个人的成长离不开他人的支持。请结合下面的提示词，以“People Who Help Me”为题，写一篇80词左右的短文。分别谈谈老师、家人及朋友曾在哪些方面给予你关心和帮助，你将怎样回报他们。

要求：1.条理清楚，书写工整，句式规范，标点符号和大小写使用正确。

2.短文中不能出现真实的人名、地名。文章开头已给出，不计入单词总数。

3.提示词语： care for，knowledge， encourage， support， difficulty， in the future， study harder(提示词不必全部用上)。People Who Help me

During these years， I have got lots of help from my parents， teachers and friends.

Answer 1

【答案】

People Who Help me

During these years， I have got lots of help from my parents， teachers and friends. When I was crazy about playing computer games， my parents didn’t blame me. They didn’t give up helping me， but they still cared for my study and life.When I had difficulty in my study， my teachers taught me much knowledge patiently. When I couldn’t get on well with others， my good friends gave me support and encourage.

In the future， I should never forget the help that they have given to me. At present， I should study harder in order to make our world more beautiful.

【解析】

试题分析：这是一篇给材料的话题作文。主要内容要包括来自于家人、老师和朋友三方面的帮助；并要表达自己自己怎样做来回报他们。在描述三方面的帮助时，根据需要可用过去时态，在描写自己将来怎么做时，可以用I want, I should, I will,等句式。

写作说明：这篇短文包含了所有要点， 能围绕内容适当发挥，内容具体、丰富。应用了较丰富的语言结构和词汇，如：When I was crazy about playing computer games， my parents didn’t blame me，but they still cared for…, get on well with, I should never forget the help that they have given to me., At present，等。用词准确、句子通顺、行文连贯、表达清楚。