Question

19．6．Write at least 60words about the topic"My Dream Life of Senior High School"．（以"我向往的高中生活"为题，写一篇不少于60个词的短文，标点符号不占格．首句已给，不记入60个词．）
（注意：短文中不得出现考生的姓名、校名及其它相关信息，否则不予评分．）
Use the following questions as a guide．（下列问题供参考）
•What senior high school life do you like？
•What do you hope to do in the senior high school？
•What kind of teachers and friends do you expect to have？
You may begin your passage with：
My dream senior high school life is …
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Answer 1

分析 【高分句型一】
And I also expect to make a friend that I could talk with him heart by heart．我也期望交到一个可以交心的朋友．
that作为关系词的定语从句，修饰friend．
【高分句型二】
I'm looking forward to my life of senior high school我期待我高中的生活．
look forward to期望，后加名词，代词或者动名词．

解答 My life of senior high school will certainly be busy，but I hope it will be a pleasant and colorful one．（喜欢什么样的高中）Of course，first of all，I want to get more knowledge，especially on Math and English．Secondly，I'd like to join a club or a society（打算做什么）．Classmates and I will take part in many interesting activities．However，teachers and friends are also an important part in my study life．Good teachers may affect my study a lot．And I also expect to make a friend that I could talk with him heart by heart．【高分句型一】（期望什么样的老师和朋友）I'm looking forward to my life of senior high school．【高分句型二】

点评 提纲类作文的要点都给了出来，在写作的时候需要使用合适的连接词把这些要点连接成一个整体．同时注意使用高级词汇和句式让文章更有亮点．