Question

【题目】VIII.书面表达（满分15分）

91.你的美国朋友John计划暑假来中国旅游。请你根据以下图示，用英语在QQ中给他留言，介绍并推荐你的家乡福建，词数80左右。

要求：

1.必须包含所有提示信息，开头与结尾已给出，不计入总词数;

2.意思清楚，表达通顺，行文连贯，书写规范；

3.请勿在文中使用真实的姓校名及提示信息以外的地名。

Hi，John, I’m glad to hear that you're planning to travel around China during the summer vacation. I'd like to invite you to my hometown Fujian for a visit.

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I'm looking forward to meeting you!

Answer 1

【答案】Hi，John, I'm glad to hear that you’re planning to travel around China during the summer vacation. I，d like to invite you to my hometown Fujian for a visit,

Fujian lies in the southeast of China with Fuzhou as its capital city. It has a population of over 38 million. Because of the nice environment, it’s known as Refreshing Fujian, which attracts millions of tourists from home and abroad. If you come, you can enjoy fresh air, blue sky as well as beautiful mountains and clear rivers. Many famous places of interest like Mount Wuyi and Gulang Island are well worth visiting. Besides，you can taste various kinds of delicious food.

I'm looking forward to meeting you!

【解析】这是一篇看图作文。根据图示可知主要介绍福建省的位置，省会城市，人口，名胜，环境及其他的相关内容。根据内容可知主要采用一般现在时态，注意主谓一致性。在组成文章时注意语言的逻辑性，词汇要合适丰富。这篇短文内容涵盖了题目要求的所有要点，表达准确，意思连贯，符合逻辑。在文章的结构组织上很好地使用了一般现在时，文章脉络清晰，自然流畅。同时，文章中高分作文比较多，如：Because of the nice environment，it's known as Refreshing Fujian．句中使用短语有："because of 因为"、"be known as 作为…而著名"．If you come，you can enjoy fresh air，blue sky as well as beautiful mountains and clear rivers．句中"If you come"为条件状语从句，增加了文章的亮点。