Question

假如明天是你妈妈的生日，你想为妈妈做一份炒饭，请根据所给内容提示，写一篇你做炒饭的过程。1. 2. 3.
参考词汇：1. fried rice  cooked meat   oil   salt   green onions(葱)
2. cook   cut   put    fry    add
3. carefully  finely(细微地)  slowly  lightly
要   求：1.语言表达准确，语意通顺、连贯；
2.书写工整、规范；
3.根据所给内容及参考词汇，可适当发挥；
4.文中不得出现真实的校名和姓名；
3. 词数：70词左右。文章的开头已给出，不计入总词数。
Tomorrow is my mother’s birthday.

Answer 1

One possible version 1：
Tomorrow is my mother’s birthday. I want to make fried rice for her in order to express my love. I am sure I can cook it very well. Now let me show you how to cook it. First, cut some cooked meat very finely. Next, I need to put some oil in the pan. Then fry the meat lightly. After that, I need to add the rice slowly. Fry it for a few minutes. Finally, add some salt and green onions. Now the fried rice is ready.(82words)
One possible version 2：
Tomorrow is my mother’s birthday, I want to do something for my mother, I ’d like to make fried rice for her. First, I must cut some cooked meat very finely. Next, I need to put some oil in the pan, fry the meat lightly. After that, I need to add the rice slowly. Then fry it for a few minutes. Finally, I should add some salt and green onion. How delicious! My fried rice is ready, I hope my mother will enjoy it.

试题分析：这是一篇给材料作文，写做炒饭的过程。结合所给材料，可知本文主要用一般现在时，人称为单数第一，人称，句子结构主要为祈使句和带有情态动词的句子。注意做法步骤的先后顺序。比如：first，second，third等句式的应用。
【亮点说明】本文内容涵盖所有要点，格式正确，语言流畅，表达准确，意思连贯；先简要说明写作目的。同时运用first，second，then, finally表顺序的词使文章先后顺序清楚、意思连贯。恰当地运用了参考词汇表达不同步骤的不同做法。第一篇以祈使句为主；第二篇祈使句加带有must、need to等情态动词的句子是主要特点。