Question

假如你是李梅，你的外国笔友Sally 来信询问你的学校生活。请你给他回一封不少于60词的信，告诉她你的学校生活，包括饮食、运动、学科以及你的感受。信的开头和结尾已给出。

Dear Sally,

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Please write and tell me about your school life.

Best wishes,

Li Mei

 

Answer 1

One possible version：

Dear Sally,

Let me tell you about my school life. I usually have eggs, bread and milk for breakfast. I have lunch at school and I like to eat chicken, fruit and vegetables. They are good for me. I play sports for about two hours every day.I often play tennis and volleyball with my friends.They are difficult but interesting.I learn many subjects. My favorite subjects are music and biology. Music is great and relaxing. I can sing many songs. Biology helps me know more about plants and animals. I love my school life very much.

Please write and tell me about your school life.

Best wishes,

Li Mei

【解析】

试题分析：这是一篇给材料作文，李梅写给外国笔友Sally，介绍她的学校生活。结合所给材料，可知本文主要考查一般现在时态，人称为第一，三人称，注意主谓一致问题，句子结构主要为动宾结构，注意一些常见句式的应用，比如： I have ......；They are ......；I can ......等句式的应用。写作中注意运用代词，注意多种句式交替运用。写作中注意叙述顺序，符合逻辑关系，注意文后要询问Sally的学校生活。

【亮点说明】本文结构紧凑，语言简练。开头介绍写信目的，接下来介绍在学校的饮食，运动，学科以及感受，最后希望Sally告诉她的学校生活。此处用了like to，are good for， play sports，helps me，know more about 等这些词组的运用也让文章增色不少。

考点：提纲作文。