Question

假设你是某国际学校广播站成员，请根据以下要点用英文拟写一份关于预防H7N9流感的通知。
1. 勤洗手；
2. 一旦感冒，马上就医；
3. 病的较重的同学，建议在家休息直到医生说可以回校；
4. 你的一、两个建议。
【写作要求】
1. 文章的开头与结尾已给出不计入词数；
2. 文章需包含要点的所有内容，字数120词左右。
【评分标准】
句子结构精准、信息内容完整、篇章结构整洁。
Announcement
Hello everyone. Here are some recommendations for keeping yourself healthy during H7N9 outbreak.
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May everybody be healthy and enjoy your study. That’s all. Thank you.

Answer 1

Announcement
Hello everyone. Here is some recommendations for keeping yourself healthy during H7N9 outbreak.The most basic thing you should do is wash your hands frequently so as to reduce the chance to get infected. If any of you have caught a cold, you should go and see a doctor as soon as possible. For those with serious illness, we suggest you stay at home and rest until the doctor tells you it’s safe to return to school. Then you’d better clean the surface of your desks and chairs at least daily. Do remember to open the doors and windows to let in enough fresh air even on cold winter days. Also, fruit and vegetables, as well as sports will surely do you good.
May everybody be healthy and enjoy your study. That’s all. Thank you.

试题分析：这是一篇提纲作文，所给要点清晰，要求明确，话题内容贴近社会热点，我们要做的就是用正确的英语把这些内容表达出来。动笔前要认真审题，勾勒要点，并适当发挥。行文中要注意人称、时态的变化及主谓一致问题。同时注意上下文联系紧密，符合逻辑关系。
【亮点说明】这篇短文能够根据写作提示，较好地把与写作相关的内容进行归纳整合，内容覆盖所有要点，语言表达准确，考生有较大的发挥空间；同时灵活使用复杂句式，使文章自然流畅。文章中还使用了一些常用的句式和短语，这为文章增色不少。在学习中注意加强练笔，掌握一些常用句式及短语，写作时就可以适当引用，使文章的表达更有逻辑性，更富有条理。