Question

5．根据中文提示和英文书信内容，写一封意思连贯、符合逻辑、不少于60词的回信．（信的开头和结尾已给出，其词数不计入所完成的回信内．请不要写出你的校名和姓名．）
假设你叫李华，是英国中学生大卫的笔友．你收到了他的来信，请你给他写一封回信，回答他的问题并就这些问题介绍一下你的好友，以及你希望大卫能帮助你的朋友做什么．（好友的名字用Daming或Xiao Hong代替）
Dear Li Hua，It was great to hear from you．You said that your friend would come to my school as an exchange student（交换生）．I want to know something about him/her．What does he/she look like？What's he/she like？What is his/her hobby？And I wonder if he/she needs my help．I'm looking forward to hearing from you soon．
                                                 Yours，
                                                  David．

Answer 1

分析 这是一篇提纲作文．时态一般现在时为主；人称主要为第三人称．
写作思路：考生需要首先审清主题，围绕主题展开作文．其次考生可从四个方面展开作文，即本文的写作要点：朋友的外貌；朋友的性格；朋友的爱好；希望大卫能够提供的帮助．

重点短语：
1． look pretty看上去很漂亮
2．with long dark hair留着黑色的长头发
3．recognize her认出她来
高分句型：
【高分句型】1．Because she has never been to the UK，could you please meet her at the airport？
因为她从来没有去过英国，请你去机场接她好吗？（Could you please …？礼貌地提出请求）
【高分句型】2．You can advise her to join the dance club．你可以建议她加入舞蹈俱乐部．（advise sb．to do sth．建议某人做某事）

解答 Hi!David，
     I'm glad to get your letter and I'd like to tell you something about my friend．My friend is Xiao Hong．She looks pretty．She's tall and thin with long dark hair．Because she has never been to the UK，could you please meet her at the airport【高分句型】？She will wear a red dress so that you can recognize her（外貌）．She's very kind and easy-going so you will like her as soon as you see her．Besides，you can introduce your friends to her．If she has friends，she won't feel lonely（性格）．As we know，your school has all kinds of interest clubs．Xiao Hong loves dancing so much that she spends lots of time on it．You can advise her to join the dance club（爱好）【高分句型】．
    With the help of you，I hope she will get used to the school life there as soon as possible（需要的帮助）．
                                                                                                                                           Yours，
                                                 Li Hua

点评 解答这种题目时，我们应该仔细阅读有关提示，弄清试题提供的所有信息，明确有哪些要点． 要依据提示情景或词语，按照一定逻辑关系来写． 根据要表达的内容确定句子的时态、语态；语言表达要符合英语习惯． 在平常的学习中注意总结，牢记一些固定句式及短语，写作时就可以适当引用，让文章更出彩．