Question

书面表达 (20分)

假设你叫李华，昨天晚上你看完电影在回家途中目击了一起抢劫案。请就以下信息，以李华的名义写一份给警方的书面材料，要求词数100左右。材料的开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。

案发时间	昨天晚上大约九点
案发地点	电影院附近的一条街道拐角处
作案人情况	两个男子，一个戴着墨镜的高个子，一个矮个子
受害人情况	一位年轻的女士，戴着一条金项链和一块金手表
案发经过	你正在街道上走着，突然听到身后有人呼救。你看到两个男子正抢劫一名女子。女子和他们进行了激烈的搏斗。当你赶到时，两个劫匪已各自骑着自行车逃跑。女子的金表被抢走了，但幸运的是女子没有受伤。

Dear Sir/Madam

I’m writing to report a robbery to you.

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I hope the information will help you catch the robbers.

Yours faithfully

Li Hua

Answer 1

Dear Sir/Madam

I’m writing to report a robbery to you. At about nine last night, I was on the way back home from the cinema when suddenly I heard someone crying for help from behind. I turned around and found a tall man with a pair of dark glasses and a short man robbing a young woman at the street corner near the cinema. The woman wore a gold necklace and a gold watch. She put up a good fight with them. I ran towards them but when I arrived, the two robbers had ridden their bikes away. They robbed the woman of her gold watch, but luckily, the woman wasn’t hurt. I hope the information will help you catch the robbers.

Yours faitully

Li Hua

【解析】

试题分析：这是一篇给材料作文。本文所给材料比较详细：案发时间，案发地点，作案人情况，受害人情况及案发经过。我们要做的就是用正确的英语把这些内容表达出来。动笔前要认真阅读材料，不可遗漏要点，并适当发挥。根据材料内容可知本文主要是一般过去时态，主语是第一人称，注意时态语时间状语的搭配及主谓一致问题。写作中适当使用连词，注意上下文联系紧密，符合逻辑关系。

【亮点说明】

这篇短文思路清晰，逻辑性强，介绍了案发时间地点及案发的经过，同时还指出了作案人的情况a tall man with a pair of dark glasses and a short man 这些内容都比较贴合文章的需要，意思也很连贯。文章中还用了一些比较好的句型，如I was on the way back home from the cinema when suddenly I heard someone crying for help from behind.

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