Question

16．上周末你们班的学生去南山（South Hill）进行了一次野营活动，根据下面的要点提示，以
A Happy Weekend为题，写一篇不少于80词的短文．
1南山距学校大约10公里，学生骑车大约一小时．
2活动：林中散步、湖边垂钓、生火做饭、湖上泛舟、篝火（campfire）歌舞
3学生们看DIY的说明，自己搭帐篷（tent）．
4师生们玩得尽兴；学生们都很期待下次班级旅行．
A Happy Weekend
                                                                          

Answer 1

分析 高分句型：
高分句型一：
Last weekend the students in our class went to the South Hill for a picnic．上周末你们班的学生去南山进行了一次野营活动．last weekend意思是"上周"是时间状语，go to意思是"去哪里"
高分句型二：
We had many activities there，including waling in the woods，fishing near the lake，cooking，rowing in the lake，and campfire dancing．我们在林中散步、湖边垂钓、生火做饭、湖上泛舟、篝火、歌舞．including 是介词，意思是"包括"

解答 A Happy Weekend
Last weekend the students in our class went to the South Hill for a picnic．【高分句型一】（介绍了时间，地点，人物，事件）The South Hill is ten kilometers away from our school，and it took us about an hour to get there by bike．We had many activities there，including waling in the woods，fishing near the lake，cooking，rowing in the lake，and campfire dancing．【高分句型二】We put up tents according to the DIY book．We had a lot of fun and really enjoyed ourselves．（介绍了主要的活动项目）We hope to have another chance that we can have a school trip．

点评 首席要仔细审题，注意时间，地点，人物，活动内容，内容要点要全面不能有漏落，时态主要使用一般过去时，结合部分一般现在时，要注意时态的变换．