Question

【题目】（题文）书面表达

根据下面提示，写一篇90词左右的短文，描述一起谋杀案件。

1.昨晚11点到12点之间，人民路上发生了一起谋杀案，被害者是一名司机，四十多岁

2.案发时，有人听到被害者求救。受害人受了刀伤，流血过多而死。

3.警方已经悬赏五万元，以获取重要线索。

4.如果你有任何信息，请拨打110和警方联系。

Answer 1

【答案】Last night, a murder took place between eleven and twelve on Renmin Road. A driver was murdered. He was in his forties. At the time of the crime, someone heard him shouting for help.

The victim was attacked with a knife and bled to death as a result. So far, the police have offered a reward of 50,000 yuan for important clues. If you have any information, please call/ contact the police on 110.

【解析】本文属于材料作文，描述一起谋杀案件。根据要表达的内容确定并准确运用时态，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑，可适当增加内容。

【亮点说明】这是一篇优秀的作文，很好的完成了试题规定的任务，语言表达符合英语习惯，准确运用时态、主谓一致，特别适用一些亮点词句，如take place, at the time of, victim, as a result, so far, clue以及contact。增强逻辑关系，增加上下文意思连贯，用词准确，句子通顺，行文连贯。