Question

三年快乐而充实的初中生活结束了，你将进入高中(中职)学校学习。展望未来，你对高中(中职)生活充满期待。请以“I Expect My School Life”为题，写一篇80词左右的短文。文章的开头已经给出，不计入总词数。

要求：（1）内容要点：①生活、学习环境(餐厅，图书馆，运动场……)；②师生、同学关系；

③生活多彩、学业进步；④补充一点自己的想法。

（2）文章不得出现真实的姓名和学校名称；要点齐全，语言通顺，意思连贯，书写规范，可以适当发挥。

（3）提示词：get along with；colorful(adj.)；knowledge；habit

I Expect My School Life

I will study in a high school soon. Everything is new to me. ____________________________

 

Answer 1

【答案】

 

One possible version: （118 words）

I Expect My School Life

I will study in a high school soon. Everything is new to me.

I hope my school is big and clean with a large dinning room. And the library is full of different kinds of books. So I can read them in my spare time. I can get along well with my teachers and classmates. I can help each other with my classmates. At the same time, I expect my school life is colorful, after class I can listen to music, play chess and basketball. To get more useful knowledge or information, I can surf the Internet. I will keep a good eating habit. Do exercise often to stay in good spirits. Try my best to make great progress.

As long as I stick to it, I can achieve my dream.

【解析】这是一篇给材料作文，题目中给出的材料较为齐全。动笔前应根据材料内容组织语言，列出简单提纲，确定句子的时态，关键单词等问题。写作中注意将以前的自己和现在的自己介绍清楚，并介绍一下自己的愿望。根据材料内容可知本文主要是一般现在时态和将来时态，注意时态和主谓一致等问题。写作中注意使用连词，做到上下文联系紧密，符合逻辑关系。