Question

书面表达（满分20分）

初中的学习生活即将结束了。请你以“How I change”为题，写一篇短文，描述你这三年里前后的变化。写作要点包括外貌，兴趣爱好，行为习惯等方面。

写作要求：

1.80词左右(开头已给出，不计入总词数)

2. 短文中不能出现校名和人名，否则不计分

3. 所给写作要点都必须要用上；紧扣主题，适当发挥。

How I change

My life has changed a lot in the past three years.

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Answer 1

First， I am taller and stronger than before. I am five centimeters taller.

Secondly, my hobby has changed a lot. When I was a child, I like watching cartoons and playing computer games. Now I like listening to music and I like playing basketball. That’s why I grow so quickly. Life is up to playing sports.

Finally, I did well in doing things and studying. When I was in primary school, I couldn’t do everything by myself, now I can do very well, I find good ways to learn all my subjects. I think they can help me get good marks in future.

These three years are very important in my life, I will never forget!

【解析】

试题解析：本题是涉及关于学生生活、学习方面的写作，主要从生活和学习两个方面展开写作，在写的过程中，注意避免时态和语法的错误，意思要连贯，过度要自然。

【亮点说明】

1、这是关于学生生活、学习的一篇作文，紧扣题目要求，围绕生活和学习两个方面介绍了自己的成长。

2、能够运用不同的句式表达自己的想法，布局谋篇较为合理。

考点：提纲类作文