Question

【题目】假如你是一名即将毕业的初三学生肖鹏，中国的传统文化历史悠久，值得青少年学习和保护。最近，你们学校组织了传统文化进校园活动，请你根据表格内容提示，分别介绍下每种和你所了解的传统文化，并为其发展与保护，提出合理化建议。

Traditional cultures	Features(特点)	How to develop and protect
Tanghulu	Famous snack,made of haws(山楂), put together on a stick(木棍) and covered with ice sugar. delicious	People show and introduce in different activities
Classic Chinese poetry	Famous poems and poets Have long history, Express all kinds of feelings by writing something wonderful in the poems	Students read and study
Chinese Paper-cut Art	Beautiful and cute pictures Cut out on a paper with scissors(剪刀) Post on the windows,or lanterns to express the feelings of happiness	Ask more people know and learn, Chinese be proud of it
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要求:1.语言通顺，要点齐全，意思连贯，条理清楚，书写规范；

2.文中不得出现真实的姓名和学校名称；

3.80~100词，文章开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。

There are plenty of classic(经典的) cultures in China. All of them have a very long history. Here I introduce four of them.

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OK. That’s all, and thanks for your listening!

Answer 1

【答案】There are plenty of classic(经典的) cultures in China. All of them have a very long history. Here we introduce four of them.

The first classic culture that I want to introduce is Tanghulu.It is one of the most famous snacks in China.It is usually made of haws, which are put together on a stick and covered with ice sugar. Therefore,it looks pretty and tastes delicious.Thus,you must like it very much.In order to make it more popular,I think it should be shown and introduced in different activities.

Classic Chinese poetry is the second one to introduce.It has a history of over 2000 years. There are so many famous poems and poets in China,such as Libai,Dufu and so on. The poets can express all kinds of feelings by writing something wonderful in their poems The words in the poems are so beautiful that they are read and studied by students. We can say that it is the symbol of Chinese culture.

There is a kind of beautiful and cute picture named Chinese Paper-cut Art. It is cut out on a paper with scissors by artists.And it is often posted on the windows,or lanterns to express the feelings of happiness.When you see it,you will fell comfortable and happy. I suggest that we should ask more people know and learn it .Because we are proud of it.

The fourth one that I want to introduce is Peking Opera. It has a history of more than 200 years. It is the symbol of Chinese culture as well. Many foreigners even come to China to learn Peking Opera. It’s special makeup and clothes attract me most. I hope there will be more inheritors in China.

【解析】

这篇短文使用了大量的固定句式和短语，为文章增色不少，如classic culture，one of the most famous，be made of，put together on a stick，In order to，so many，such as，and so on，all kinds of feelings，so…that，the symbol of Chinese culture，be proud of等。而The first …the second one …The fourth one …等使短文很有条理，层次清晰；同时It is usually made of haws, which are put together on a stick and covered with ice sugar./ The words in the poems are so beautiful that they are read and studied by students./ When you see it, you will fell comfortable and happy./ I suggest that we should ask more people know and learn it .等there be结构的运用，丰富了短文内容，使表达多样化，是本文的最大亮点。在学习中注意总结牢记一些固定句式及短语，写作时就可以适当引用，使文章表达更有逻辑性，也更富有条理。