Question

【题目】学校将举办英语写作比赛，请根据所给提示，以“My life in 20 years”为题，写一篇短文，分享你对未来的憧憬。

注意事项：

1．词数: 100词左右(文章开头已给出，不计入总词数)；

2．文中不能出现真实姓名、校名等信息；

3．文章必须包含所提供的主要信息，并作适当发挥。

My life in 20 years

I’m always working hard for a bright future I imagine

Answer 1

【答案】My life in 20 years

I’m always working hard for a bright future I imagine.

In the past school life, I have learnt a lot of knowledge and made many friends. My past life in school have much fun, and now I want to talk about something about my future.

In the present I study hard to get collage. After collage life I will face more new challenges, for example, the first is I need to get a job and work hard to make money. I want to be a teacher when I grow up because I want to impart my knowledge to the new generation.

Second, I need to make money to support my parents because they have given me so much when I was young. What’s more, I will take good care of them to express my thanks

【解析】试题分析：这是一篇材料作文，提示内容就是本文的写作要点。这些要点构成写作的基本框架。我们要做的就是用正确的英语把要点表达出来，并适当发挥想象说出自己的观点。动笔前要认真阅读材料，不要遗漏要点，并适当发挥。根据材料内容可知本文主要是用一般现在时态和一般将来时来写，要注意主谓一致等问题。写作中要适当使用连词，注意上下文联系紧密，符合逻辑关系。