Question

12．清晨，在上学的途中，我看见鸟妈妈在给小鸟喂食，它们在林中快乐地歌唱，此情此景，让我想到了家人（爸爸、妈妈…）在生活和学习中给予的关爱和帮助，请写一封80词左右的信，表达你的感恩之情，注：请不要写出你的真实姓名和学校名称．
内容包括：
（1）根据 划线文字和图片描述情景；
（2）记叙感恩的人和事；
（3）表达愿望和祝福．
参考词汇：mother bird（鸟妈妈）  feed（喂）
书信的开头与结尾已给出．

Answer 1

分析 高分句型一：
On my way to school this morning，I saw a mother bird feeding her baby bird when I walked along the Xiangjiang  river．
句中"when I walked along the Xiangjiang river"为时间状语从句，句中短语有"on one's way to…在某人去…的路上"、"see sb doing sth 看见某人正在做某事"．这句话意为：早晨，在我去学校的途中，当我沿着香江走的时候，我看到了鸟妈妈在给小鸟喂食．
高分句型二：
I hope you are in good health forever．
句中"you are in good health forever"为宾语从句，句中短语有"be in good health 身体健康"．这句话意为：我希望你能永远身体健康．

解答 Dear Mom，
On my way to school this morning，I saw a mother bird feeding her baby bird when I walked along the Xiangjiang river．【高分句型一】They were singing in the trees happily．（途中遇到鸟妈妈喂食）
On seeing this，I can't help remembering you，my dearest mother．It's your kindness and love that support me a lot in my life．When I was 10 years old，I caught a cold and had a high fever in a midnight．I felt so terrible．It's you who took good care of me day and night until I recovered to be well again．You are the best mother in the world．I love you．（触景生情，感谢妈妈）
I will try my best to work hard and be an excellent girl to reward your love．I hope you are in good health forever．【高分句型二】Best wishes!（表达祝福）

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