Question

3．假如你是来自希望中学的李华，即将开始高中的学习生活，面对新老师、新同学，请用英文做一下自我介绍，可以涵盖以下内容．
1．在家和学校的表现；
2．兴趣与爱好；
3．对高中生活的展望．
要求：
1．除以上内容外，可适当发挥．
2．文中不得出现真实姓名、校名或地名，否则不予赋分．
3.100词左右；首尾句已给出，不计入总词数．
4．请在答题卡指定位置作答，否则无效．
Hello，everybody!My name is Li Hua．I'm from the Hope Middle School．                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                  
Thank you!

Answer 1

分析 【高分句型一】
I am always ready to help others who are in trouble．我总是乐于帮助那些有困难的人．
who作为关系词的定语从句，修饰others．
【高分句型二】
I can sing and dance so well that I often give performances at our school party我唱歌跳舞都很好，我总是在学校聚会上表演．
so…that：如此…以至于．that引导的结果状语从句．

解答 Hello，everybody!My name is Li Hua．I'm from the Hope Middle School．I am very happy to stand here to talk about myself．I am a kind and helpful person．At school，I am always ready to help others who are in trouble．【高分句型一】I can sing and dance so well that I often give performances at our school party．【高分句型二】At home，I often help my parents do housework．I think doing housework is not only my parents'duty．（在家和学校的表现）
I can sing and dance well，I think they make me feel relaxed．and I often give performances at our school party．That makes me very well-known in my school．Also，I like reading，I think reading not only give me knowledge but also open my eyes to the world．（兴趣与爱好）
In the senior high school，I will get on well with new classmates and teachers，and I will study harder，I hope I can learn how to learn better so that I can enter a good university．That's all!（对高中生活的展望）
Thank you!

点评 涵盖题目要求的所有要点，表达准确，意思连贯，符合逻辑．文章脉络清晰，自然流畅．同时，文章还使用了一些常用的句式和短语，这为文章增色不少．在学习中注意积累，掌握一些常用句式及短语，写作时就可以适当引用，使文章的表达更有逻辑性，更富有条理．