Question

5．请以I want to be              为题．写一写你将来的打算（包括你的目标和你将采取的行动），字数不少于60个字
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Answer 1

分析 高分句型一：
In order to protect these animals，I want to be a volunteer．为了保护这些动物，我想成为一名志愿者．
in order to为了，后跟动词原形，作目的状语；want to be，想成为…，动词不定式作宾语．
高分句型二：
To be a good volunteer，I need to do more．要成为一名好的志愿者，我需要做的更多．
To be a good volunteer为动词不定式作目的状语；need to do sth需要做某事

解答 I want to be a Volunteer of Protecting Animals
As we know，animals are our good friends．Hower，as we can see，some animals，especially rare animals，are becoming fewer and fewer．（引出话题）
In order to protect these animals，I want to be a volunteer．【高分句型一】（点明想成为一名志愿者）I am active and out-going．I like animals，such as cats，dogs，rabits as well as everything related to animals，like newspapers，magazines and videos．I often take part in the activities of protecing animals．For example，last month I presented a show called Stopping Hunting．Many people came and supported me．（成为志愿者的优势）
To be a good volunteer，I need to do more．【高分句型二】I will read some books about animals．Meanwhile，I will join a club whose aim is to protect animals．（今后将采取的行动）
I believe I can do the work well．

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