Question

【题目】初级写作

寒假( winter vacation)就要到了，怎样度过一个丰富多彩的寒假？请根据以下提示，以My Resolutions for the Winter Vacation为题写一篇短文。

要求：字迹工整，文意通顺，适度发挥；所给提示必须全部用上；词数80词左右，开头已给出，不计入总词数。

提示：1.多多锻炼，保持健康；

2．好好学习，完成好作业；

3．回家多和家人交流；

4．空余时间打算学点什么？

5．你还有些什么愿望呢？（写1-2条）

My Resolutions for the Winter Vacation

My winter vacation is coming soon.____

Answer 1

【答案】

My Resolutions for the Winter Vacation

The winter vacation is coming.I am going to relax myself. I will do sports every day such as playing basketball and table tennis because doing sports can keep us healthy. I am going to visit my friends and relatives. I am sure we’ll have a good time together. Of course, I am going to do some housework and learn how to cook because doing housework can help me grow up. And I will often talk with our family.I will finish doing my homework on time and review what was learnt. I am going to the bookshop to buy some interesting books because I like reading very much. I am sure I will have meaningful and happy holidays.

【解析】

试题分析：短文叙述了自己假期的计划，所以句子的主语用第一人称，句子一般用将来时，要注意不要遗漏要点，注意上下文的衔接，使用一些高级词汇。

写作亮点：短文用了一些短语和句式，如：do sports做运动；keep sb+形容词；have a good time玩的开心；talk with和某人谈论；finish doing sth完成做某事；用了because引导的状语从句，增加了文章的亮点。