Question

Writing 4 (2015江苏南京秦淮区一模)

    假定你是你校英语报的小记者，以下两幅图展现了发生在 刘林家的生活场景，请根据要求写一篇英语短文投稿。

内容要求：

1. 简要描述两幅图的内容；

2. 概述你对两幅图的理解；

3. 说明两幅图对你的启示。

When Liu Lin was four,... Twenty years later ,...

注意：1.文中不得出现你的真实姓名和学校名称；

2. 语言通顺，意思连贯，条理清楚，书写规范；

3. 词数80左右，文章的开头已经给出，不计入总词数

    It happened in Liu Lin's family. 

Answer 1

Writing 4

[写作提示]

1. 审题：

这是一篇图文结合的记叙文。以第三人称客观介绍发生在刘林 家的生活场景，以第一人称表达你对此事的观点及给你的启示。主体 时态为一般过去时和一般现在时。

2. 确定要点：

(1) 简要描述两幅图的内容：

① 20年前，刘林4岁时妈妈为他洗脚；

② 20年后，刘林为他妈妈洗脚。

(2) 概述你对两幅图的理解：

① 父母把时间和精力都花在照顾孩子身上；

② 长大后我们应懂得感恩父母。

(3) 说明两幅图给你的启示。

[参考范文]

    It happened in Liu Lin;s family. Twenty years ago,when Liu Lin was four,his mother helped him wash his feet every day.Twenty years later,Liu Lin grows into a young man. Now he helps his mother to wash her feet every day.

    What do the pictures tell us? On the one hand,when we were young,our parents devoted themselves to taking care of us. On the other hand,we should always remember what our parents have done for us. When they are growing older,they need our love and care as well.Therefore,it is important for us to pay our parents back after we grow up.

    In my family,my parents also give me great love and care every day.I love my parents from the bottom of my heart.Thus,I will learn from Liu Lin to do something for my parents from now on.