Question

【题目】假设你是李华，你刚认识一位笔友。应笔友要求写一封电子邮件介绍你的学校和学校生活，并欢迎他来你的学校参观。请根据以下要点，用英文写一封电子邮件。

1.你在第一中学上学，学校又大又现代化；

2.每天花半小时乘公交车去上学，上学从不迟到；

3.你的教室在一楼；

4.早上通常先做早操，8点开始上课；

5.同学都很友好，空余时间相互聊天；

6.在校总是过得很开心。

注意：

1.短文须包括所有内容要点，要求语句通顺、意思连贯；

2.词数60个左右，短文开头已给出，不计入总词数。

Dear Simon,

Thank you for your email. Let me tell you about my school. _____________________________

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Answer 1

【答案】

Dear Simon,

Thank you for your email. Let me tell you about my school. I study at No. 1 Middle School. Our school is big and modern. It takes me half an hour to get to school by bus every day. I’m never late for school. My classroom is on the ground/first floor. We usually do morning exercises first. The lessons start at 8. My classmates are all very nice. We chat with each other in our free time. I always have a good time at school. Welcome to my school.

Sandy

【解析】

试题分析：这是一篇提纲作文。根据提纲内容可知用一般现在时，按照提纲要求逐条翻译成英文名字。同时还应注意写作中要有适当性的发挥。

【亮点说明】文中使用了非常好的短语和句子为文章增色不少，例如 late for,do morning exercises ,have a good time,以及Let me tell you about my school,Our school is big and modern.It takes me half an hour to get to school by bus every day,We chat with each other in our free time文章层次清晰，内容饱满，表达流畅。