Question

下面是某学生针对上网有益还是有害进行讨论后的结果。请你据此用英语写一篇短文，介绍他们各自不同的观点，并给出你的看法。开头已给出。

赞成（60%）	反对（40%）
1.可以从网上获取所需信息	1.上网浪费时间和金钱
2.对学习有帮助	2.网上有学生不宜阅读的东西，对其有害。
3.在网上交朋友	3. get headaches or sore eyes
4.receive and send e-mails to friends	4.和朋友联系可以写信或打电话
你的看法

The table tells us that 60% of the students think getting online is very helpful.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Answer 1

【答案】

The table tells us that 60% of the students think getting online is very helpful. They think the Internet is good for the them. Since they are tired in school and the Internet can make them relax. They can also learn more knowledge from the Internet. They can get the information that they need quickly from the Internet. It makes them learn more in the world. What's more, they can make friends and receive and send e-mails to friends on the Internet.????

However, there are still 40% of the students think getting online is very harmful. They think surfing the internet is a waste of time and money , and it's bad for their health, and they always get headaches or sore eyes .If they always play it, they don't want to study any more. Some bad websites lead them to know the bad things. Besides, the Internet is not true. They are so young that they can't tell which is right or wrong. As for friends, they can get in touch with each other by calling or writing letters.

In my opinion, we need the internet, but we should make good use of it and get rid of the information that will do harm to us.

【解析】

试题分析：这是一篇材料作文。所给材料内容详尽，要点清晰。我们要做的就是用正确的英语把这些内容表达出来。动笔前要先认真审题，勾勒要点，然后润笔成型，并适当发挥。根据材料内容可知本文主要是一般现在时态，主语是第三人称。写作中适当使用连词，注意搭配及主谓一致问题，注意突出观点，符合逻辑关系。

【亮点说明】这篇短文使用了大量的固定句式和短语，如: make sb do sth、be good/bad for、not---any more、what’s more、so---that---、get in touch with、make good use of、get rid of等，加上一些连接词如and、however、besides的使用，为文章增色不少。学习中注意总结,牢记一些固定句式及短语,写作时就可以适当引用,使文章的表达更有逻辑性，更富有条理。

考点：提纲作文。