Question

【题目】假如你是王平， 你的英国朋友Harry正在学习汉语， 请你就汉语学习方面给他写封电子邮件， 向他介绍一下如何学好汉语。词数不少于100， 开头已给出， 不计入总词数。

Dear Harry，

How are you?______________________________________________________________

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Yours

Wang Ping

Answer 1

【答案】Dear Harry，

How are you? I am very glad to receive your letter. Now let me tell you something about how to learn Chinese well. Learning Chinese just like learning any other foreign language, needs hard work. Learning Chines takes time so you should spend as much time as you can. Use Chinese whenever you can. This is very important. The more you use Chinese, the better you will learn it. So why not take every oppotunity to practise using Chinese for communication. And you'd better listen to the tape and repeat after it, watch Chinese films and TV programmes, read Chinese stories and newspapers and so on. "No pains, no gains". If we work hard, I am sure we will learn Chinese well. That's all. I am looking forward to hearing from you.
Yours

Wang Ping

【解析】这是一篇材料作文。以邮件的形式向自己的好友介绍一下如何学好汉语。需要自己发挥的地方较多，要围绕How to learn Chinese well这一主旨精心准备材料，注意句子的完整性和表达的准确性，例如主谓一致等。结合所给材料，可知本文主要考查一般现在时态。时态为一般现在时态。注意多种句式交替运用。写作中注意叙述顺序，符合逻辑关系。

写作亮点：该篇作文紧扣材料，要点完整，表达准确通畅。开门见山，对于如何学好汉语提出自己的几点合理化的建议。最后复合句的运用If we work hard, I am sure we will learn Chinese well.提出了自己的希望，让人容易接受。