Question

【题目】书面表达

浙江卫视“中国梦想秀”播出了一个残疾女孩的故事。请根据下列提示，讲述她的故事和你的感受。

要求：

1、参考提示语，可适当发挥；

2、语句通顺、意思连贯、书写工整；

3、文中不得出现你本人的姓名、所在学校名称；

4、不少于80词（开头已给出，不计入总词数）。

Yang Pei is a disabled girl who is well-known because of the “Dream Show” on Zhejiang TV. __________________________________________________________________________________________

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Answer 1

【答案】

Yang Pei is a disabled girl who is well-known because of the “Dream Show” on Zhejiang TV. She is twenty-five years old and she is from Shanxi. When she was young, a terrible accident happened to her. And she lost both her arms after that. So she never went to school. She was very sad. But she always thought she should be a useful person. So she learned to do things with her feet. Now she can look after herself and make a living by herself.

We are very healthy and strong. Let’s learn from Yang Pei. Whatever happens to us, we should never give up.

【解析】

试题分析：本题是一篇话题作文。首先要仔细阅读有关提示，弄清试题提供的所有信息，明确有哪些要点。提纲是文章的总体框架，要在提纲的范围内进行分析、构思和想象。本题要求介绍主人翁的个人信息、过去的经历及现在的情况。短文用第三人称，一般过去及一般现在时态。

写作亮点：本范文包含了图表提示的所有信息，并作了恰当的发挥。短文语句通顺、意思连贯、时态准确。文中运用了时间状语从句，宾语从句，使短文表达更生动。用了and, so, when等等连词，使短文更加紧凑，读起来朗朗上口。短文第二段，语言简捷，中心突出，言简意赅。