Question

12．假如你的学校要开展"创建和谐校园（a harmonious campus）"活动，请根据提示写一篇倡议书，号召大家为创建和谐校园而努力．要求80词左右（文章开头已给出，不计入总词数）．
提示：1、努力学习，积极参加课外活动；
2、友爱互助，尊敬师长；
3、爱护花草树木，不随地乱扔废弃物．
Our school is like our home．I have some advice to build up a harmonious campus．All the students in our school should work hard at our lessons．After school，we'd better take an active part in activities，which help improve our health and study．
We should be friendly to each other and help each other．We should respect our teachers and get on well with our classmates．
It is our duty to keep the school yard clean and tidy．We shouldn't throw wastes around or pick flowers．
Please do our best to make our school beautiful．And we'll love our school better．．

Answer 1

分析 高分句型：
①It is our duty to keep the school yard clean and tidy．保持校园整洁是我们的责任．句子考查It is our duty to do sth做某事是我们的责任，句子中it作形式主语，真正的主语是to引导的不定式短语．
②After school，we'd better take an active part in activities which help improve our health and study．放学后，我们最好积极参加有助于改善我们的健康和学习的活动．句子中 which help improve our health and study作activities的定语，构成一个定语从句，had better do sth表示最好做某事，后面跟动词原形．

解答 Our school is like our home．I have some advice to build up a harmonious camps．（引出话题）
         All the students in our school should work hard at our lessons．After school，we'd better take an active part in activities which help improve our health and study．We should be friendly to each other and help each other．We should respect  our teachers and get on well with our classmates． It is our duty to keep the school yard clean and tidy（高分句型）．We shouldn't throw  wastes around or pick flowers．（介绍如何创建和谐校园）
         Please do our best to make our school beautiful．And we'll love our school better．（发出号召）

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