Question

假如你是李华，就个人爱好带来的困惑给英国朋友Stephen发电子邮件进行交流并请求帮助。

要点：

李华	爱好	对太空旅行感兴趣；经常到图书馆阅读资料
困惑	得不到老师理解
观点	1.个人爱好有助于学习； 2. ……(至少一点)
老师	观点	时间应花在功课上；成绩就是一切

要 求：1）表达清楚，语法正确，上下文连贯；

2）必须包括表格中所有的相关信息，并适当发挥；

3）词数：100词左右（征文的开头已给出，不计入总词数）；

4）不得使用真实姓名、校名和地名等。

Dear Stephen,

I am writing to tell you about my problem with my teacher. I don’t know how to deal with it and would like your help.

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What shall I do? Can you offer me some suggestions? I am looking forward to your early reply.

Best wishes

Li Hua

 

Answer 1

Dear Stephen

I am writing to tell you about my problem with my teacher. I don’t know how to deal with it and would like your help.

You know I am crazy about space travel. In my spare time I often go to the library to find something to read. This makes my teacher very angry. To him, good marks are everything and I should spend more time on my lessons, even at weekends.

I think healthy hobbies are helpful for our studies. If I can achieve a balance between my schoolwork and my hobby, it will be of great value to my future development. But I don’t think my teacher understands me . I feel bad about that .

What shall I do ? Can you offer me some suggestions? I am looking forward to your early reply.

Besth wishes

LiHua

【解析】

试题分析：考查提纲类书面表达：这是一篇提纲类作文，我们需要用正确的英语把给出的要点表达出来. 动笔前，一定要认真分析要点，理解要点要表达的含义，不能遗漏要点，跑题偏题。本作文中给出的要点比较具体,故需要准确表达.写作时注意准确运用时态，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑关系，尽量使用自己熟悉的单词句式，同时也要注意使用高级词汇和高级句型使文章显得更有档次。特别注意在选择句式时要赋予变化。平时除了加强词汇积累，写作联系以外，还可以适当记忆一些类似的范文，这样在考试中可以起到事半功倍的效果。

【亮点说明】范文出现一些常见的短语am crazy about对。。感到疯狂； spend more time on 在。。花费时间；are helpful for对。。有益； offer me some suggestions提供某人建议； looking forward to盼望着；This makes my teacher very angry.这让我的老师很生气，angry做宾语补足语。If I can achieve a balance between my schoolwork and my hobby, it will be of great value to my future development.如果我能平衡功课与作业，它将对我的将来发展很有好处， be of 不可数名词等于be +adj .

考点： 提纲类作文