Question

同学们，眼看三年的初中生涯快过去了， 回想初中三年，一定有你经历过的快乐或忧伤的事，有令你感动或难忘的同学，有关爱你伴你成长的老师，父母和亲人，在这毕业之际，你要对他或他们说些什么呢/? 请你以“Thanks for…….. ”为题，写一篇80词左右的作文。（15分）
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Answer 1

 
Thanks for my English teacher
I have been studied in middle school for three years.In a few days,I will graduate.I will never forget my English teacher.I would like to thank her for all the help she gave me.
My English teacher is a beautiful woman.She is kind but strict.She is also humorous.She always made her class interesting and active.My Spoken English was poor,and I failed the exam.She did not blame me.She helped me with my English after class.It helped a lot.My English is now better and better.She was always patient when I asked her some questions.I felt so encouraged and became more comfortable in speaking English.I hope her everything goes well.

试题分析：这是一篇话题作文，题材贴近学生学习生活实际，内容涉及对父母、亲人、老师和同学的感恩。考生只要确定感恩主体，然后用正确的英语把相关内容表达出来即可。因此，在动笔前要认真审题，尽量抓住要点，并适当发挥。根据材料内容可知本文主要是一般过去时态，行文时要注意人称转换及主谓一致问题。同时注意上下文联系紧密，符合逻辑关系。
【亮点说明】这篇短文开篇点题，对老师的帮助表示感谢。接着回顾过去，难忘老师的帮助和教诲。短文使用了大量的句式和短语，如：I would like to thank her for---、She is kind but strict、She always made her class interesting and active、She helped me with my English after class、I hope her everything goes well等，学习中注意总结,牢记一些常用句式及短语，写作时就可以适当引用，使文章的表达更有逻辑性，更富有条理。